AlephAchilles it made
Posthuman Saviour brave
Aleph we all praise
AriadnaThrough worm hole they went
Lost from our gaze they flourished
They fight to be free
Combined ArmySinister alien Force
Made Paradiso a grave
divided we'll fall
Haqq IslamHoly Mohammed
Enlightened science they make
Silently they war
NomadsShunned banished in space
Wandering D N A Change
Three homes have evolved
Pan OceanaPowerful they be
Rich decadent and depraved
Technology crutch
Yu JingGlorious Yu Jing
None match our warriors blades
Honour is our way
So which one do you guys all like best? I honestly can't decide. I think that technically they're all haiku as they all meet the 5-7-5 syllable rule for the three lines. However I'm not a literary master so if I'm wrong please correct me. I'm liking Aleph, Haqq Islam and Yu Jing. There's a pole now live on the Official Infinity Forums. Peace out!
My favorite is the one for Ariadna but they're all great and I'm likely biased, too. My absolute favorite line however is the final one for the Nomads. I really enjoyed this, thank you!
ReplyDeleteHeya Papa, I aim to please. I think its just a bit of fun. I know they conform to the rules of Haiku in terms of the syllables, if not to the metaphorical nature of the art form. I enjoyed pulling them together and I think each... in a roundabout way captures the essence of each factions background.
ReplyDeleteWell for the HoP Idol comp I went with the Combined Army one in the end. The bloody official forums left me with a dead heat between that one and the Yu Jing one so in the end I had to flip a coin!!!
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